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Tuesday, 15 August 2017
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By Tekatiti
The day I was riding a pram down the hill and the brake failed.
It was a  year latter. I was
at port hill´s in Christchurch.
It was 4.00pm after I  was getting changed.
A year latter I was at the top off port hills in Christchurch then I found a blue and black pram. Then I tried to  use it to go to school . By the time I got to the bottom the brakes failed.Rendered Image

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12 comments:

  1. William25 August 2017 at 14:24

    Nice job with your work and i hope you can keep the writing some good storys

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  2. Bronte25 August 2017 at 14:29

    I think your woke for imagine danger.
    from Bronte.

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  3. Holly25 August 2017 at 14:34

    hi

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  4. ronav25 August 2017 at 14:34

    tk I like how you used discripshine in the story.

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  5. Tekatiti29 August 2017 at 14:03

    thinks for commeting
    :):):):)

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  6. mitchell29 August 2017 at 14:04

    tk i like the work that you have done

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  7. mitchell29 August 2017 at 14:05

    good job tk

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  8. Mr Kris Barrow29 August 2017 at 15:47

    1. I like your creative story Tekatiti!
    2. I like how you have used actual place names so I know where the setting of your story is eg Port Hills.
    3. Remember that proper nouns like Port Hills need to start with capital letters just like you have for Christchurch.

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  9. ronav15 September 2017 at 14:14

    Sup Tk i like the long storys you put on your blog

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  10. Tekatiti15 September 2017 at 14:28

    hi my name is Dylan and i am commenting on tk work. waits up Tk

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  11. Gerhold11 May 2018 at 14:28

    lol

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