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Friday, 15 June 2018

Poem making


This is my poem making.
I hope you enjoy!

Planning your own poem
Now write your poem here
Superman

Blue sparkling eyes
Black curly hair
Moves like flash
Breaths like cold ice
Strong masly like hulk

Sound angry like hulk

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tekatiti its Isla,
    I like the Character you chose from DC comics that was really interesting. Maybe next time you could try use the spelling tool for some of your mistakes but thats okay just keep trying. I remember when I wanted to be superman when I was 6 but everybody made fun of me because superman was a male.

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